Wednesday, August 08, 2007
♥ 11:11 PM
I'm blogging too much today.
My dear Becky, for those who have been asking for it. (: She, Shao, my dogs and my sister are my last hopes of sanity in this world. Hm.
I won't post my poem here, but I will post my comments. (: Two only, cause I only showed two people. But I'm waiting for people to comment on Storywrite. (: Hopefully.
Shao: powerful! hello! i think this poem was wonderful - it was both meaningful and the way it was written, i felt, made it quite impactful. the thing with the names was clever, too, although it might be a bit distracting. there are some lines i really love in here, but really, i just think the poem is awesome on the whole.
Jing: hmm, it's not bad. but i don't get the names bit. on purpose? (i explained) not say very obvious leh... I can see now la.
Heh! (x It's called Cracked. Just like me.
Dett.
